Wednesday 12 August 2015

cross
country

Numbness  fills my body as I seek the finish line victory is almost mine.I race to the finish line losing my breath but I keep on running. the numbness  is taking over my body but now there's only one more thing standing in my  way and that the finish line. as I cross the finish line I collapsed in a pillow of joy and relief that I have over taken the great and powerful cross country.
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  1. Anonymous14 August 2015 at 23:47

    I LOVE THE WAY YOU HAVE MADE THIS SOUND SO DRMAMTIC LUCAS. REMEMBER TO CHECK YOUR WORK BEFORE YOU PUBLISH IT- THERE ARE A FEW THINGS TO FIX UP HERE.

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